OK, time for us to go to school. This was unsolicited and seeking publicity so I have no problems using as an example of what NOT to do when trying to pitch bloggers to post about you, your blog, your book, etc. On Sunday I get this email:
Peter.
I love your blog. Refer to it all the time and appreciate the stuff you find, observe and opine on peterthink.
As you might have noticed from our blog www.marketingplaybook.com, we are publishing a book, surprise, surprise, it's called "The Marketing Playbook." Well, it's done and it's coming out at the end of October.
In it we took a bunch of the lessons we learned as marketing execs at Microsoft along with what we've learned from a ton of start ups and other companies as VCs. And then we tried to turn all this into something that could help take the mystery out of marketing strategy and tactics for regular business people and`marketing people alike.
Anyway, I've attached a preview (not fully edited). Would love to know what you think. And if you like it (or even if you hate it) we might like to hit you up for a mention/review on your site.
Best. Thanks, John
Let's take this point by point:
Personalize Your Message - Come on, at least try and pretend that you have actually read my blog. When I read a line like "I love your blog. Refer to it all the time and appreciate the stuff you find, observe and opine on..." I think "well you say that to all the bloggers." It's sucking up by cut and paste.
If you want to suck up...er...get a bloggers attention you need to take a few minutes and actually read the last week or month of posts on their blog. Mention some real content that you found interesting or helpful. Be specific.
Of course the second clue to the fact that Josuha's message is less than personal and sincere is the fact that he doesn't even get the name of my blog right!
Get to the Point - If I'm still reading, you're lucky since you've already tripped my human spam filter, you need to tell me why you are sending me this unsolicited message. He mentions his blog and his new book. He says it's done and coming out the end of next month. Well I would hope it's done if he wants publicity. Then comes this gem of a paragraph:
In it we took a bunch of the lessons we learned as marketing execs at Microsoft along with what we've learned from a ton of start ups and other companies as VCs. And then we tried to turn all this into something that could help take the mystery out of marketing strategy and tactics for regular business people and`marketing people alike.
First question, if you have so much experience in marketing then why are you essentially spamming me for publicity? Second question, since you are taking the mystery out of marketing for "regular" business people does that mean that marketing people are constipated? I thought everyone was involved in marketing these days.
Do I really have to explain the Attachment Thing - This is perhaps the best part! The preview that Jason attached to this unsolicited spam like email is OVER 1MB Remember it's unsolicited so I'm in no hurry to open this huge file that wastes my time and bandwidth. That's before I even think about viruses, trojan horses and the lot. Since this former Microsoft marketing exec is so savvy in his use of the blogsphere to promote his message I am hesitant to touch this huge file. If you want a blogger to look at something send them a link to it! Tell me briefly why this is worth my click. Don't we all know this already. If I like what I read then I might use that same link to point to it on my blog. If you don't want your document posted on the net then don't send it out at all. What's to keep anyone from posting what you send out anyway.
Is it Finished or Not? - He said the book is finished but whatever this preview is it isn't fully edited. Why are you telling me that the preview isn't fully edited. Is that to excuse any mistakes you have made? Do you think it's somehow more special and "inside" to send out an unfinished product? Thanks, I'll wait until you are finished.
Asking Without Asking - At the end Jim says that if I like it(or even if I don't) he might hit me up for a review/mention on my site. There's a typical broadcast type message. Again, I bet you say that to all the bloggers. You would do better to find some connection between your ideas and those of mine on my site and use that as a way to make your pitch relevant to me. Try "Peter, I know you are interested in xyz. In the book we talk about a,b and c as it relates to xyz. Please give it a read and email me your thoughts." Step one - engage the blogger in a relevant discussion of your ideas. Step two - once in a conversation request the blogger comment on their blog.
Anybody else get this email? Anybody else have tips for pitching to bloggers?
Oh, I almost forgot. Bet you are wondering what amazing, compelling, intriguing, engaging subject line got me to open the email in the first place. It read simply - "a preview" ..........Sigh!
John, I would be interested in reading your preview but like many other people I don't open attachments to email. If you want to send me a link to a web page version I'll have a look.